Hi Amanda, great start. My one steer for you is that this is written from the outside looking in. For the need narrative to really shine, you need to be in the shoes of your customer… in this case, parents.

Consider this as a starting point, “For parents of depressed teens, it’s a constant struggle to…”

Hope this helps!!

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